Oh, lovely! Is this the Nonsuch we're speaking of? Enthralled is such a good word for what you've drawn here: I love the moment of him stroking her wood, and knowing that he belongs to her.

And such a bittersweet note, right at the end: that his ship would be the truest love he'd ever know.

(And if you'd like to make this a new post of its own, please do! More people will see it that way.)